All Comments on 'Falcon and Domino Ch. 08'

Hi,

I'm following your story and am a bit annoyed about the progress of the story. The last couple of chapters lack any real plot advancements and just contain the "against the clock scavenger hunt" to stop the video from being released. I also think these parts of the story go too fast and could use a bit more depth. None the less I'm looking forward to the development of the story.

I love the way Domino keeps showing her superiority by humiliating Falcon. Power to the girls. Katie.