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All Comments on 'Fall of the Star Sentinels Ch. 01'

by KallieHF

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DevilBookCorruptionsDevilBookCorruptionsover 3 years ago
This was excellent!

Hey, I just wanted to let you know this was a great read and I can’t wait for more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Awesome

Fab story, can't wait to read the next chapter!

ModsognirModsognirover 3 years ago

Great story as always :)

I am very much looking forward to what happens to the others.

Thank you for writing and sharing it with us :)

sinfulwolfsinfulwolfalmost 3 years ago

Excelleny use of envy. Delicious corruption, and I look forward to reading the others

Marklynda2Marklynda2over 1 year ago

The beginning of the fall!

Very well thought out and written story. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Definitely looking forward to reading how the others fare. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

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Hi! I'm Kallie, a writer of erotic stories - mostly mind control and hypnosis-themed erotica, but I have written other stuff in the past and may do again. The main platform for my writing is my Patreon page, and by throwing me a few dollars a month on there you can ensure I ke...