All Comments on 'Fallen Ch. 04'

Christ, another story that oretends to have a plot and characters that makes senss, but abandons both within four chapters for nonstop sex. If you want to write pure stroke stop with the embarrassing "chapter" crap. You're not writing a story.

Loved it! Don't listen to pretentious people that comment aggressive criticisms, keep writing the way you want to!

tried to read story, started of ok, but became very predictable very quickly, woman doesn't like being kidnapped so starts playing up, male doesn't like being called names he deserves so resorts to physical violence as if that helps...nope normal women would not respond to violence, they would just grow to hate their captor more and more... so not realistic either. will not be reading anymore of this.

Learn to do it people. On that vein, there is typically a cooldown period between sex scenes, especially nonconsent. However, I still enjoy the chemistry between the two.

This is so hot that it makes my jaw drop open in awe. Please don't listen to the negative people, continue the story!

I love the details, I love that she is going through detox, I want more!

Sexually hot interplay between the antagonists and she makes me laugh so much!