All Comments on 'Fallen Ch. 15'

I really love this story and now here are two more boys to care about. I can't wait to see how everyone interacts, especially Star and the the twins. Given what Alex said about the lady speaking to him, I suspect there will be a close connection between the three. I wish the chapters were longer, but that's mostly because I'm greedy and want it all now. The story is moving along at a very good pace and, as always, the characters are well defined with each having their own personalities and characteristics. I look forward eagerly to more.

This is a great story, and I'm looking forward to find out what Star tries next, and how Luma deals with him. Such a good story...I love it.

Anonymous...why do read this story if you're going to make nasty comments? That was just plain rude, and I think you are an ASS!

Whomever anonymous is, ignore them. He/she truly does not have to read the stories they don't care for. That was always a wonder to me, if you don't care for something why do you keep indulging in it. We KNOW YOU DON'T LIKE THE STORY, GO LIVE YOUR LIFE WHERE YOU LIKE THINGS. There are others who like the story and are enjoying it. So GO AWAY, WE HEARD YOU. THANKS. WE RESPECTFULLY DELCINE YOUR OPINION. Nephylim, this story is amazing. I cannot predict what is going to happen other than your characters are learning from one another and that they actually need each other to survive. Keep doing what you are doing, I am fascinated by the complexity of all the characters. Just whom is saving whom? This story shows that everyone needs something or someone. If not to make them feel special, or whole, but maybe to give them purpose when they feel no hope. I LOVE THIS STORY!!! THANKS FOR SHARING YOUR IMAGINATION!!!

The difference in Luma from the first chapter to this one is amazing. I already love Sam and Alex.

I enjoyed the story very much. Now I need to go to the beginning an read up on it. Don't stop writing.

A 'Symbii

I'm not precious, dears. Those with negative comments have as much right to post them as those who have positive ones. It would help if the comments were a little more constructive, but what difference is there, really, when someone says I loved it and when someone says it was garbage. They're both valid opinions.

Never fear, the whole story is written and complete and i submit a new chapter every time the current one publishes, so the whole thing will get here eventually :)

Next chapter has been submitted and should be here soon. I hope you'll like the bombshell when it drops ;)

Surprises can be good or bad. Since you said you hope we'll like the bombshell, I'm hoping nothing bad happens to any of the characters. I'm already a bit in love with them.

I am so in love with all your characters and how the new boys each have contact with or a little piece of Astaria in them. All of them are vastly different, but all are loving and kind, even Star. My favorite is Bridge because he's so sweet, and I worry (in a non-real life way) because he's delicate. I can see this story going on forever with little snippets of their daily lives.

Intrigue, pleasure and wait more.. he is such a darling and to save the twins was beautiful to read... to the negatives if you don't like the story then don't read it geez!! I can't wait to read more you have so many dimensions and twists its brilliant and then for another message about Star lol that was cleverly done and I thought that was the bombshell ah well hurry with the next chapter so we can find out what the real bombshell is....

Hope, faith and love. The strongest of which is love. So if it doesn't hurt anyone, who are we to judge?