All Comments on 'Falling for His Father Pt. 01'

this is so messed up but so hilariously realistic. i love it. your writing is fantastic. keep it up

not much detail on the sex...

I liked this. Seems that sexy Ted should have some hair for the sexy muscular chest. A great turn-on for a man! Give Robby something to lick and stroke his fingers through!

Very good story how I wish I could find a man to suck on and be fucked by. It is all my step dad's fault he was so gentel when he first fucked my cute little butt, so now I wish I could have it every night, or day or every hour or so. Just can not find a man close enough to me to have fun darn it. da.cd@frontier.com

I agree that the sex should have been as detailed as the rest of the story, but it was a good story nonetheless. Keep writing!

The plot moved from 0 to 60 in about 5 seconds, meaning the two protagonists met and had sex in just a few hours. Yet, this clearly cannot be a quick jerk-off story because the sex scenes are skipped over. So, I am assuming that there will be conflicts/events which will slow down the plot and make this into a story of substance...and that we'll have some more detailed depictions of lovemaking down the road to boot!

Loved this story,I was seduced at 17 by a 50 yr old man I’m now 68 but never forgot him I married twice as I could never come out, wish I could turn the clock Differnt in England now

but how is it their fault Pete made the decision to call them boyfriends without them both agreeing?

Am I missing something? These kind of erotic stories are generally meant to have fantastic sex scenes. You literally just completely skipped over the interesting parts. I won't be continuing with this story.

I agree with the other gentleman. you skipped the hot part. would love to have known more about the actually love making.

RF

I had gay sex with a 39 year old greek god gym rat. We were in the coffee shop by the gym. A young man csme in and spoke to my sex toy. Turns out he was his 18 year old son.