All Comments on 'Falling for My College Roommate'

Your gentleness, romantic, and sensual way of bringing these two guys together make for a good chapter 1. Look forward to reading the later chapters.

Well, that seems to be a great way to begin. I really hope this will be continued, after all, there are a few more semesters to go in this sweet story.

Very nice start. At least I hope it's the start of a hot, sexy romance. cp

This is a great start for what can be a great story.

real nice, hope there is more to come.

You have a great romance here -- a slowly growing love story between Jake and Tommy. Both seem so careful with each other, so careful that once they realize and admit their love, they won't want to damage it or end it. I'm surprised that one or the other doesn't have a bit of sexy chest hair, or a treasure trail? Please write more, and include descriptions. They are really good together. It is a reward that fate brought them together as roommates and made them love each other.

This can't really be the end of the story can it? When is part 2 coming out? When do we get to read about the romantic date or when they go on vacation to meet the families? Im super curious on this

I enjoyed the slow burn for Tommy! It was not clear how Jake was feeling but a few subtle hints along the way gave hope that he was just being cautious, but was feeling the same way! I would enjoy reading more about how things work out for these guys!

Just a little constructive criticism. The writer is painting a picture in the minds eye with words! The more descriptive, the better we can imagine what these two hot young buds look and smell and physically feel! Such as the bellybutton segments, did Jake have a treasure trail, are his feet smooth or slightly hairy, and as most guys have some hair on the calves, does he have hairy legs, are his pubes manicured or natural! Same for Tommy!

Well written! This was a good story, but being more descriptive could have made it better!

So cute

Young love and a sweet, sweet romantic story. Five Stars

Very nice, sweet story. Enjoyed a foot massage. :)

I love feet too and give a great foot massage. Such a sweet story. Thank you.

Please can we have part two? I adore these two & I don't want to be done with them yet!