by FollowTheWhiteRabbit
Just right
No real depth, but it just hit the right note. Two people can indeed exist around each other without getting attached, but the anticipation is there and when they come together it could possible be with a bang. That's what it looked like to me and I liked it. 5*
Absolutely brilliant. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. I wish we could have a better description of the two lovers. Cannot wait to read more of your work.