by DG Hear
I enjoy all your tales, this was a good one again - thank you.
somewhere east of Omaha
The story was enjoyable. It was a little plain and did not invoke emotion. 4✨
Beautiful story! The way it should be, just him and just her! 5 BIG FAT FLAMING STARS.
What a lovely story, well written and a great storyline. My only disappointment was that this lovely story wasn't longer as it was an enjoyable read. Well done 5/5
Well done. Thank you for writing it and sharing it with us. Please keep writing and publishing regularly!
"I saw you on the west side in a car with another man. Is there something you need to tell me?" is not an accusation, it's a question. Particularly since her itinerary didn't match her action.
Simple, sweet to the point. A story of hope for those who have lost a love.
You know the characters are well done when commenters defend a character. :)
A refreshingly sweet story 5⭐️. TO cleanse the palette now back to the carnage from you sir. Lol
i needed some sort of reason why he would just automatically go to cheating? he knew when she did for a living right? that felt forced. maybe if his parents had something like that happen or friends or something but nothing was mentioned or maybe he was just a negative thinker
Why should John apologize or feel bad for questioning Sandy when he saw her with a man when she was supposed to spend the day with her mother!! It was right to question it!! Also, why didn't he know she was showing a client a house in the same area he was performing!!
Every person, man or woman, deserves to have the happiness you both enjoy now. Congratulations, and may God bless you and your family!!