All Comments on 'Falling Home'

question really well written. Great pace with good utilization of dialogue to tell your story. I'll look for more.

In addition to Anon's comments about dialogue and pacing, I'll add that you draw interesting characters, both as primary and supporting cast. I'll be along for the ride.

Lit ID: Tyro999

I've commended it to my bi partner.

I appreciate the comments! Seriously, thanks y'all.

knocked me out, left me almost speechless with admiration. The development of plot, the dialogue, the characters, the handling and pace, all tell me that here is an author who is familiar with the craft of writing – and the practice of attentive reading. This is a winner in my book. Please keep writing. You have "it", and it shows. Thank you for a very fine story.

What a great start... Slow build... Smart, funny, sexy girls. Adi and Natalie intrigue me, I am so looking forward to reading the rest of their story... My only regret? That I started this on a work night... I wish i had saved it for a rainy Saturday...

I mean, honestly? It is a story about lesbians, yeah?