by Luckie_Duckie
It’s obvious that this story has nothing to do with chapter 1.
So why has it not been corrected?!
It’s very irritating that I read this story trying to figure out how to connect the two unrelated stories.
Disappointed.
I really like this chapter so far. Not sure how it connects to the first chapter yet, but I would like to read more. Your characters are very real with depth and dimension to them. Interesting and interested.
I read the first chapter of this "story" the other day. Please resubmit under the correct title.