All Comments on 'Falling Pt. 02 - Awakening'

Much of this beautiful piece reads like poetry. So easy immersed in the images you create. Thanks for sharing your feelings with us. More please. 5 stars unquestionably.

Thank you for this lovely comment - I'm glad you enjoyed it :-)

Astonishing well written and a truly beautiful piece. Thanks for writing and sharing these words with us all. A true wordsmith indeed. Take care, B.

Thank you so much B.

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Wow!

Late to see this second part after having commented on the first. Such intensity: it's palpable, visceral; yet holding steady at such a slow pace, like the orgasms you have. Wonderful writing.

Thank you! Hope you enjoy the final part too if you get a chance to read :-)

For some random reason I recalled your request for feedback on your first story submission, which was beautiful, where your words lingered in my mind. Enough for me to check just last night if you’d written another, and low and behold you now have 2 more! Very beautiful with so much obvious and genuine love and affection. And beautifully written too, dream-like and real at the same time! 5 stars (and will check your 3rd story when I get a chance).

Thanks so much Thefireflies - flattered that you remembered 'Falling' in this way and really appreciate your feedback on this one. Hope you enjoy 'Fallen' too :-)

Wall to wall sex in highly articulate and detailed state of consciousness prose.

My partner and I read and talked it through together with growing arousal and inevitable outcomes, as with part 1.

Altogether a delight and much appreciated!

- G.