All Comments on 'Falling Pt. 03 - Fallen'

That the two lovers are nameless enhances the emerging love story that is “Falling” — you truly immerse us in the gripping, growing passion that defines this relationship while slowly unveiling the two lovers — like filling in spaces, they emerge bit by bit. This storyline may be a fantasy for you; for me it is a beautiful love affair, and as a near hopeless romantic I could accept with some reluctance the last few lines of this piece as an ending. Yes, a bit of poignancy, but no regret that they have fallen in love with one another. Maybe not the ending you have planned (?). Suffice to say, you are remarkably adept at transcribing your imagination into words and scenes that resonate in a very intense way. So many of your lines/phrases bring smiles. Obvious that I am caught up in your fantasy, which is surely one reason you share your writing. Hope you continue to share your talent. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Thanks so much for another lovely comment Migbird. It means a lot that you've taken the time to explain specifically what you enjoyed about 'Falling' and your feedback's really made my week :-)

Also, while the sex scenes are complete fantasy, all of the context around them is real... so, yes - I don't think I'll ever be happy with this ending either!

So much intensity - surely your arousal levels run high as you write, perhaps into a virtuous spiral. We anticipated that the strap-on so soon would be a bridge too far but you can do whatever in fantasy land.

All 3 of your stories, in masterful writing, affected us in the best of ways. Without doubt, the best lesbian material we have ever read.

A big Thank You ...

- Gill.

@Gill - a big thanks to you and your partner on your lovely feedback on all three parts, especially for taking the time to select quotations you liked and for appreciating the fantasy nature of 'Falling'. So pleased you both enjoyed reading them :-)xx

God, extraordinary, brilliant, utterly beautiful writing. The best description of what sex is actually like i’ve read. Thank you. Write more. PS as an English teacher, i love the glimpses towards poems - an ecstacy of fumbling etc.

This is such a lovely comment - I'm really pleased you enjoyed reading. Thank you <3

@Migbird - thanks for your message. Yes, hoping I'll feel inspired to write again at some point :-)

Incredible, gorgeous, exceptional, erotic writing. I’ll never read the word ‘pearlescent’ again without thinking of this and you. And magnesium strips! Please think about writing another episode.

@anonymous - thank you :-) There are two more parts if you didn't already find them xx

@anonymous - just realised you're commenting on the third part, not the first. Oops, sorry! Not sure I'll ever add another part to this story tbh but might try something different in the future. Thanks again for reading, and for your lovely comment :-)