All Comments on 'Falling Slowly'

Fantastic start, looking forward to much more!

Damn! 🥵

Great start. I look forward to reading more soon.

Please continue!!

Pretty entertaining, gonna assume she was the one responsible for what's happening here.

Hope there may be more parts as this feels like an intro.

Kinda suspicious how "stupid" he is, since he never gets suspicious of the milk and the immediate tiredness + bed wetting. Sure, it's needed for the story and I don't really have a better idea. But still feels a little off. Would be my only suggestion for improvement for future writing.

Thanks for sharing.

What a brilliant story! I love the slowly escalating manipulation and seeing his life gradually spiral out of control! Will eagerly look out for any future installments

Wow! Sure looking forward to more chapters!!

Very fun story! Thanks!

Loved it. From begining to end. Can't wait for part 2!