All Comments on 'Familiar with Benefits Ch. 01-06'

Hello!

Thank you so much for taking the time to read my story. I don't usually write stories this long and I've been sitting on this one for half a year. I wasn't sure if it was worth publishing and I wouldn't have if it weren't for the encouragement of fellow author Selina_Shaw so please give her works a read. She's fantastic and an inspiration.

Anywho, I'd really appreciate any feedback or thoughts you might have on the story so please let me know! Have a wonderful day <3

I liked this a lot! You have a great take on the relationship between the 'imp' and Ryg, it is a unique and interesting spin I must say. There are not a lot of plot hooks for future development, but at the moment that does not matter. The short term future is right in front of us. I eagerly await the next installment.

Great story, can’t wait to read more. Keep it up !

Loving it!

Despite the MC being slightly grating, this is great so far. There are many directions this could go in, and I think I'd like many of them

Immaculate character writing, love all the cast members, the setting is just what it needs to be, and the romance/smut is well paced. Can't wait for more!

The protagonist in this is so pathetic and so stupid that it robs the story of all joy.

Personally I find a person of this nature incredibly hard to believe is real. It reminds me a lot of the typical Japanese stereotype male main character. And I fucking hate it. That said I do have hopes for our pathetic "hero" to grow into a much stronger more confident version of himself.

Great story so far! Really liking how the MC is changing over time, and looking forward to reading more about the world in general. Looking forward to seeing how Dys' imp has been interacting with her after seeing Ull's experience!

Aaaaah this was SO GOOD! An absolute blast, I adore Kiu and oh god poor Ryg, I'm such a sucker for stressed out men haha. This had me cackling and grinning all the way through, so quick and sharp, and one of my favourite themes is unravelling an uptight boy soooo I'm hooked. I'm really intrigued by the shifting dynamics and attractions between the four characters and the exploration of power and allure. So excited for it to continue (if you want to)!!