All Comments on 'Families Ch. 01'

looking forward to the last chapter

The only suggestion I would make is to break up your long paragraphs into a couple shorter ones. Other than that, it was really good!

Outstanding story--loved knowing that she got it from behind when he finally took control and fucked her at the end.

That was incredible. I've been reading erotic stories for a long time as well, and I have to say that was one of the best.

Although Chapter One of FAMILIES could have included more erotic scenes, it was without a doubt in my mind one of the best stories I have read to date. Having read erotic stories since I was thirteen years old (I'm 28 now), it really means something big to say that it was one of the best stories to date. Thank you, thank you, thank you!!

Good for you. Please keep up your focus on love and respect. Please don't be tempted by the dark side, and let a partner try to hurt and/or humiliate their other.

Fantastic,a great story.like the way you write,keep it coming