All Comments on 'Family Affairs Ch. 06'

by Devonnudist

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

way too short, I'm surprised you made a one page chapter.

DevonnudistDevonnudistover 7 years agoAuthor
Short?

It is what it is. There is more to come, but with lots of new characters I feel it is best to spread their introductions out in different chapters. Some readers don't seem to be able to cope with too many characters at once.

sober71sober71about 7 years ago

Short but still hot, introducing New character's graduly is good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Please write more such family stories

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