All Comments on 'Family and Friends'

Tough to read when written as poorly as that. Punctuation needed and a little more explanation of who characters are would help also.

I agree. I had a horrible time following the story line. An editor would have been useful.

I got lost with her being a lesbian then gets married.

I disagree - simply fucking brilliant!

Get an editor and then get a story line. This was beyond ludicrous.

One of the worst stories I've seen!

Loved this very sexual story.The incest, partner swopping and lesbian scenes were awesome and had me masturbating to orgasm. Great writing.

Title says it all.

Negative 100 stars!