All Comments on 'Family Business Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Ok it time to let Santiago have revenge if he part Mexican trust he has plan to get even am just not a fan of stories when the MC doesn't get even after been done so wrong

Sometimes in these stories authors get a little unbalanced and right now he needs to get even with that damn longboard other wise your going lose people. Its like watching a rocky movie he gets beat than comes back beats the opponent(longboard) and his family this what I hope but I don't think you can

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

It’s time for the main character to man up and stop being a pussy and everyone but the dad should get fucked over

svencarnsvencarnover 2 years ago

Yeah I thinks it's time Santiago gets his revenge. This story is really we written, but it's too well written. I sympathize with Santiago to much to hope for anything but some good revenge porn at this point.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Yeah echoing others, Santi wasn't even remotely wrong, and to accept the beating like it was his fault is bs.

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I love writing. But the thing I love writing most of all I think, are smutty stories that have a story plot also. UPDATE for 7/21/ 2021 I am currently working on my Dark Roots chapters and working on a second installment for Family Business. be on the lookout for more charact...

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