by MishaPearl2
Was waiting for Sally to say "Daddy" with Nel around. Nel was obviously still asleep since nothing was said. As always, 5 stars.
That's the essence of the big mystery of this to me: why they are keeping that fact he's her grandfather from her. Considering everything they've been doing, it's hard to imagine this would be a deal breaker for Nell. It's just being stretched out for no real reason.
love the story so far, but id love to hear more about claude and carlas relationship, what was it like growing up with his sister/daughter and why did he not see his sister for 6 years
Unsure whether there are three distinct Anonymous commenters here, but never mind :-)
Re: The Slip... Claude was reluctant to tell Sally he was her father, if you recall, based on his promise to Carla... I think he likes to keep what is complicated as simple as possible. This may not last, LOL
Perhaps a 'Flashback' chapter could be written. I'll take it under advisement.
As always, your comments are much appreciated. MP2
one of the best stories in a long time, love the idea of megans dad fucking her
I wasn't talking about Sally.
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I stated "...why they are keeping that fact he's her grandfather from her" which clearly was referring to Nell.
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What's complicated about it? From Nel's perspective she's fucking her uncle and her mother is fucking her brother. Knowing the true parentage really isn't that much more and keeping it from her just seems forced.
Thanks for your feedback, Anonymous. I agree the relationships are developing and seem straightforward to outside observers (omniscient readers) but it is important to retain the perspective of the participants. No doubt Nel, a teen coming of age, and Sally, who already has been informed, have a greater capacity for sorting things out than Claude, at present, realizes. He still finds things complicated. MP2
Glad you like Megan's idea, Anonymous. He may not know it now, but he will probably like it, too! MP2
I thought there were enough combinations within the family. It didn't help when within the same paragraph Nel was referred to as niece and granddaughter. This was before Megan was added to the ever expanding pool of partners.
Is it possible to have too much of a good thing? imho we might be getting close (for me)
this chapter, however, was pretty well telegraphed. no surprise, sex was ok. to me, Megan is just a side show. maybe i'll be proven wrong later. but all in all a really fantastic story