by MishaPearl2
i was beginning to like your interpretation - god sucks. i just don't want to get hit by a lightning bolt!!
And although true - you don't need to read The Adventures of Tom Sawyer to enjoy Huck Finn - the background and understanding of the characters gained reading one story helps you enjoy reading the other. Hopefully that will be the same with these stories.
I just realized Iâve been misreading your âhandleâ... Go Ducks! Anaheim or Oregon? Either way, sorry for the misnomer! MP2 :-(
âDevelopmentâ is a continuation of the core relationships, but it is also a sequel and a complete tale in its own right. One does not have to read âTom Sawyerâ to enjoy âHuckleberry Finn.â I hope I continue to earn your readership with every chapter. Keep on keeping on. All feedback is welcome! MP2 :-)
Tired of always getting 5 stars. Great continuation. Glad to see Sally loves tuna fish!
1 thought - you may want to add a caveat at the beginning of this chapter that itâs a continuing story and readers will get more out of it if the start with Family Comfort. Just a suggestion.
Love the passion they all have for each other! Your writing gives up a lot of details that other writers lack these days. Keep up the amazing work!
You may be interested to read Family Comfort, the first story about Claude. In a nutshell, Claude fathered Sally by their mother, Carla making Sally his sister as well as his daughter and therefore Nel is both his granddaughter and his niece. :-) MP2
I enjoyed the story, and the incestual sex was great, but the familial relationships had me scratching my head (Mother, Daughter, Aunt, Niece, Granddaughter, Father, Uncle Grandfather, etc).