All Comments on 'Family Development Ch. 05: The Beard'

The tension is going to go through the roof here, I can just feel it.

I am glad you are getting into it :-) MP2

You’re keeping me on the edge of my seat with this “sidebar” to the main story. This is a well written clever chapter. Of course 5 stars. Although a little predictable that Ben is a prick, adding kristy adds a lot of intrigue. On to chapter 6

It is gratifying to hear I maintain your interest and keep the characters alive. Despite your perspicacious prediction regarding Ben’s “prickness”, I hope there will be surprises for you in the coming chapters. Kristy is a cutey for sure. MP2 ;-)