All Comments on 'Family Disrupted Pt. 02'

You have no goddamn idea how to write about prison.

Fuck me stupid, we’ll have to drop our IQ to 90 to think piece of shit is erotic. Watching goddamn grass grow is a better turn on than this putrid mess. Hell, a barn full of pig shit is about as erotic as this...that’s to say it’s not. It’s vomit inducing.

Stop writing because you can’t. Go take up yoga or something less likely to turn our stomachs.

What did I think of this story? I thought it to be a worthless piece of interracial trash not worthy of the Loving Wives category! It probably would best serve by being posted on a restroom stall divider.

Fuck man …u r the greatest writer since Shake spear!

U really managed to fill four pages of written rotten filth!! Man U r amazing ! Ur mummy will be mighty proud that after all the whoring she did to get u …finally u amounted to something! Even if it’s just a cum sodden brain mushed shitty writer! Great man keep it up…atleast till u end ur wimpy life in a urine soaked bath!!!

Why so many stories revolve around racist fantasies. We have a weak white male again and a huge black man with a huge phallus. Disgusting story humiliating whites. 0*

Great story

A total waste of time. He has lost her as his wife.

If this was written on paper it would be suitable for use as toilet paper.

Good chapter

crap story from the outhouse. -10 stars. what a deadbeat author.

More racist shit. the black cock myth lives on.

Even if you put this in IR it would be a terrible story.

GARBAGE-1* Why is this trash allowed to be posted?

More of that BBC bullshit mythology again. Ludicrous. As is her response to him. Then again, it does appear to be written by a brit, what other countries has so many limp-decked betas in faux marriages with gutter sluts?

Great story? Really? Only a fucked up filthy mind would think this is great. 1*

Keep going.

It doesn't make sense. It's not realistic. But so what?

It's hot, very hot. I like how sick the story is.

I don't get how someone can comment about how "sick" the story is on the 2nd chapter. Chapter 1 was just like that so why would you read chapter 2? I'd like to read a story written by those anonymous and see if they could do better. You have a right to not like it and let it know but don't be a dick about it.

Crap , Crap , and more crap .

I knew I would regret reading this and I couldn't even finish it.

There is absolutely something wrong with this writer.

I am quite sure this author is not human but a fallen angel who hates humans.

Keep this trash where it belongs in the IR section

WHO WROTE THIS DUMBSHIT?TOO BE SMART PERSON SOUND SO DUMB.

Im starting to think you're a troll. No one, not even the mentally ill dicklette owning, card carrying members of the Illumicuckie would enjoy this tired, cliched, walking talking pile of steaming feces, laced with a side order of several STD's.

Congrazt you are in the running for dumbest, worst LW story and thats saying something junior.

So would a conclusion in which the husband and his jailed friend come up with a plan to fight back be too much to expect? Probably so, as that would probably be considered racist these days.

So glad to see you’re back posting again! Hopefully you’ll continue making more of these great stories!

You have to be REALLY offensive and vile to piss off both the cheating wives/moving on story crowd and the traditional cuckold kink crowd. Oh. You ask how I know? It's not the comments but the fact you have an early established rating. Usually that only happens when a story posts that had cheating wives/btb/moving on elements OR a story written by a popular author.

Basically, your story is such awful hot garbage that you managed to offend 75% of the regular readers. That is a talent in itself. You're still racist and disgusting but you managed to do where so many have failed.. you brought together the readers. Well done.

Now, find a therapist because you are gross. I mean that. Gross. There is nothing cute or attractive about your racist fantasies. - starsong77

As an aside. This is the most lazily monitored website that I have ever seen. One of these days someone is going to take notice of all the racism, rapey story lines, borderline underage story themes. People already have of course but no one to really cause a feeding frenzy in social media.

This site really needs an overhaul

at least i now know to avoid this author(loose interpretation)if any more stories are allowed-dont see how.

Do you know what a caricature is? It's similar to a cartoon. This is a caricature.

This belongs in Romance. It’s too sweet and gentle for LW.

St*ries like this is a great reminder why this great country has fallen from grace and why only a true christian like Donald J. Trump can save us from Lord's wrath. Whoever is reading should repent and stop reading blasphemies like these.

Like Chapter 1, some really unbelievable shit, But all in all very hot!!! hope there is more

Porch monkey porn

SCORE CHEAT ALERT

This racist shit is being cheated for its scores.This utter drivel is in the wrong catagory.

I hope everyone scores it the 1 it deserves to get the score down

JJ

Brain damaged trash. Seek help...

utter rubbish, author alone in a dark room with a laptop and a limp penis trying to get it hard

The master is back..

Missed you man!

to bad there's not a - scale you'll get a -10

Ah, yes, the myth of the BBC, used by micro-penis cursed authors looking for excuses and blaming their own skin tone for the inability to please a woman.

Carter sends her home with a black baby in her pussy.

If the commenters really didn’t like it but made it all the way thru and still interested enough to comment???? Sounds more like they don’t want to admit how much they liked it!!!! Great work and fuck the haters

not loads of cum, this story is loads of bullshit LMAO

I just don’t get this type of story at all. If I couldn’t physically beat them to death, I’d get a gun and not be quick about it.

If you're response to this story is dumb bad faith bullshit or wanting to inflict violence on the characters you're a fucking weirdo with more insecurity and smaller dick energy than any micro-penised cuck ever will have.