by CB_Grl_Dani
It feels like I am missing the 1st chapter even reading scouries story this is not connecting. I guess the time being almost the same and not going from the end of the original time
Very nice. A bit shorter than I was expecting but I can't wait for what I hope is more to come.
Ahhh, it's such a great story and you're leaving so much to our imaginations. It would be so hot for you to delve into the seduction of the other women. I appreciate that this is your story and I don't second guess an author, I just plead for more, lol. Thanks for writing it's much appreciated ππ
Again, mistakes abound!
"Suddenly the atmosphere got very Closter phobic for the psychologist."
Seriously? Have you never heard of a website called Dictionary.com? π€ Geezus! (That's spelled that way on purpose to avoid taking The Lord's name in vain.)
The correct word is "claustrophobic" and I didn't need the website for the correct spelling. However, there are times when I occasionally do need a little help and I use it. π You should too and get yourself a GOOD editor.
1/5 for seducing his own mother. π π€¬ π‘
Supporting his mother is laudable. Having sex with her is disgusting.
Except for Van, I feel sorry for the women in this story. The father does not deserve what his son is doing to him. The acts of the son confirm my support for abortion at any age.
I see the similarities between the two stories but you have a nice twist to it. πππ