All Comments on 'Family Drama Pt. 03'

i really enjoyed this story can't wait for more

This is great!

While I'm in favor of Polyamory, marriage to your own mother crossed a line in the sand. If David was to marry Vanessa and Krista both, I'd have been happy. But this took it way too far from decency. I'm done here. 1/5

Narrative got a little shaky early on as some of the dialogue was superficial, bordering on "corny". I also think you advanced some of your plot lines a bit quickly, especially with his mom. It should have taken a bit more playing with her psyche to get her to cross the line. I may have missed it somewhere, but where does David get his money? There's a lot of spending going on with no apparent full time time job funding his escapades. 4* for this installment...

Absolutely top tier stuff. Please continue and finish this story!

Love the pregnancy plan but actually marrying all of them is a bit over the top.

Can’t wait for the next part

Woohoo when's the next part?

The character of the son gives males a bad name.

Two thumbs up way up

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