All Comments on 'Family Film Fun Ch. 01'

by flashgordon562006

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namidaboshinamidaboshiover 3 years ago

I love short and to the point stories like these. More like this good sir. It definitely has a lot of potential.

RanDog025RanDog025over 3 years ago
COME ON!

HE'S ABOUT TO GRADUATE FROM HIGH SCHOOL, THERE A CONTEST HE'S GOING TO ENTER TO WIN A SCHOLARSHIP OF $25k SO HE DECIDES TO ENTER AN INCEST PORNO? DID I MISS SOMETHING HERE? I KNOW IT'S A FANTASY FICTION BUT "COME ON". STILL GAVE IT 5 STARS!!! YOUR THE BEST FLASH!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Need to continue with the story

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Please write Ch. 02, 03, 04

I enjoyed the story and can't wait for the next chapters. Keep on writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Good concept but sloppy execution.

AdahaJingAdahaJingover 3 years ago

This story is a lot like the cabin which is a character. A little rough, probably had termites, the two fireplaces need to be cleaned. If used properly this series had potential.

bshell47bshell47over 3 years ago
AWESOME story

FANTASTIC mother and son.

Please continue!

Can’t wait for the next chapter when all three get together .

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

The premise was terribly weak & fake, but the action was better-not that great though.

Earned three stars.

Bill

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