All Comments on 'Family First Ch. 01'

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cerabuscerabusalmost 4 years ago
good story so far

a really good start to what could be a great story if it has a chance. So many ways it could go ..

kennyboy82kennyboy82almost 4 years ago

Sometimes you just know in advance that something's going to be good, this is one of those times!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Great start

Happy to see you posting again great work

CinnaminDraconnaCinnaminDraconnaalmost 4 years ago
Very good start

Looking forward to the next installment. The 'magic' necklace could lead us anywhere. :)

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Hi! I'm a hobbyist author that likes themes of gender relationship and the subversion of "normal living." I try to keep my stories quick and punchy, plenty of "action" in each chapter. I enjoy bimbos and bellies and a little bit of who's "got it" and who "doesn't" ;) ... I mea...

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