All Comments on 'Family Foursome'

A little short and to-the-point, but a very good read regardless. Please continue, hope you add more characters. Lots of potential here. Thanks for sharing.

max052

Because I get the distinct, impression, that you don't know what the hell, they're used for, and are just inserting them, at random. ,

Oh lush young cunts, I could be in heaven, sucking and fucking these two, just love eating cunt, while fucking another, then swopping around. More and more like this please and soon

I was confused. It seemed like they were from different families. Could be a hot story with more work.

but the delivery was horrid. Grammar sucked, especially the punctuation. But more than that, the plot development and descriptive passages were non-existent. Sorry, this did nothing for me.