All Comments on 'Family Fun Ch. 1'

Excellent! I loved the plot.

Sorry, I fell asleep...... Was I meant to be reading?

Very well written, and with multiple angles of interest.

Loved it.

I am eager to read the next chapter and am going to do so right now. Thank you for writing.

Good pace and exciting outcomes.

Enjoyed your story, thank you....

Generally I'm only ever interested in the first encounter and how the line to incest is crossed.....

But I'll make an exception and look for the next chapter now.🤣

😊🙏🙏😊

THIS is definitely an interesting way for a story to develop...not sure who is going to do what, wife-and-daughter-wise...

THEN, all he'll breaks lose, daughter and wife exhibit behavior that is Ssssoool lascivious, delicious, and surprising, from dad's description of each...I cannot wait to read the next chapter(s)!!

**5**Stars, well-deserved!