All Comments on 'Family in Transition'

Great story, loved to read it, got horny as hell. Even better if Ted and Will had sucked Chucks big black cock and Chuck assfucked both the men.

Impregnating his own daughter is absurd, not erotic. This writer needs to get his head into eroticism, not distorted families. Any eroticism evaporates under consideration of what the child would eventually know, what kind of social life all three would have, how they would handle the genetics (blood and organ donation, etc.)

No thought went into this plot.