All Comments on 'Family is Not Blood Ch. 04'

2stars. Grammar and syntax errors notwithstanding, this is horrible. This series becomes less and less believeable. Such extreme EVIL in part 1 to this reconcilliation bullshit?

Very good, I am enjoying your story very much hence the 5 star rating.

I have read any of your later stories (soon to be rectified). The only criticism I would pass is to have someone edit your work, I as the reader do it and because your story outline is so good it is worth it!

This was more of an .... ?

over the hard conversations? What a total cop out. Why bother writing the story?

No violent emotional storms just a logical but surprising development. Could it be that many people read Loving Wives to feel anger and hate?

Thanks for the effort.

For sharing.

I know crap when I see it.

1*

Nice story, very realistic.

Thanks for your gift!

SliperyRox

Oh by the way, I noticed another cowardly troll abusing you for your efforts,

remember gastric expulsions are what they are... try to ignore them, open a window if need be. They go away..... fade into the sunset, Wink Wink.

I never cease to be amazed that comments posted seem to suggest that these stories are factual. Get real people: it is fiction, and as such need to be read and enjoyed. I admire any author who is able to write a story, something I can't do. To Wieliczka, keep writing. I am enjoying the story.

For those of you criticizing any author I ask the question: If you can do better, then why aren't you doing it?

you are writing a full fledged cuck wimp story of giant proportions

forgiveness does not mean taking someone back. Forgive and forget. Once a cheater, the mental aspects of it, always a cheater. You can never trust her again.