All Comments on 'Family Lessons Ch. 7'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Good but hate the dialog

I really love your descriptions of the characters and their acts but I really hate the way Tommy talks. Keep up the great writing and I hope you keep on with this series.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
uuuuuuu

good story i liked it but how old is tommy...... stupid really he talks like hes 10........

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Had a terribly hot story, but you just had to take it too far.

I thought William had enough sense to not tell another teenager but you proved that untrue.

Went from 5’s to 1’s.

Bill S.

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