by GeorgeTasker
I really love your descriptions of the characters and their acts but I really hate the way Tommy talks. Keep up the great writing and I hope you keep on with this series.
good story i liked it but how old is tommy...... stupid really he talks like hes 10........
Had a terribly hot story, but you just had to take it too far.
I thought William had enough sense to not tell another teenager but you proved that untrue.
Went from 5’s to 1’s.
Bill S.