All Comments on 'Family Life Ch. 09'

You certainly write a good story, but please do not use kneeled, the word actually is knelt (past tense I think)

english is not my 1st language. For me bad grammar always

spoils the enjoyment. Sorry.

I loved the way you put us into that experiance.

I also agree with the other poster that bad grammer can greatly distract the reader.

Think of it this way. A picture is worth a thousand words. In these stories pictures are not used, so you must use a thousand words. Using bad grammer creates a blurry picture.

Thanks

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WOW - that was some sort of fuck fest - a;though I am not personally into anal - I love to watch guys fucking each other - you had be well and truly heated up - keep it up babe -

Actually there was way too much male/male stuff in this whole story to suit me. It is all right if that is your style and I don't mind a little bit of it but incest between male family members does absolutely nothing for me, no thrill at all. And this story was just full of it. Otherwise I liked it but I surprised myself by reading 8 chapters. I was not forced to read it, I will admit and I am not condemning you for writing. It was a good story, just not my style. Thank you for writing.

Mind Blowing story... i like this story very very much. please bro write more stories like this , but where a son is must centre point, perhaps a son and his wife(dauinlaw) son and his parents and dauinlaw and her parents,+

Bro and his wife mean I and My wife, My younger bro and his wife, my lil sister and her husband and our mom and dad you can include kids