All Comments on 'Family Love Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

sexy build up - beautiful :)

namidaboshinamidaboshiabout 2 years ago

Very good chapter. Kudos.

Veena is really loosening up, which is very good. Sameer is also a class act. That boy is going to drown in pussy soon. I hope the sister, Maria joins in the festivities.

The names of the characters: Akthar and Sameer are Muslim names, Veena is a Hindu name and Maria is Christian. You picked up quite a blend of names. lol

Cheers

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Well done all around, but .. being a well-done 4 pager, I believe she could still have had her moment to ponder “the next step” and then the Author could have had them conclude with The Act, which based on his sterling narrative would have been one to really remember, yes ?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Best story love from Karachi me kiran

dudefromusdudefromusabout 2 years ago

One of the best Mom-Son stories I have ever read. I think you should take it the next level where they go all the way

Another part could be a threesome with Mira and/Or Maria

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Update

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Please update

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Update

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Please update

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