by fanficlover2000
Very good chapter. Kudos.
Veena is really loosening up, which is very good. Sameer is also a class act. That boy is going to drown in pussy soon. I hope the sister, Maria joins in the festivities.
The names of the characters: Akthar and Sameer are Muslim names, Veena is a Hindu name and Maria is Christian. You picked up quite a blend of names. lol
Cheers
Well done all around, but .. being a well-done 4 pager, I believe she could still have had her moment to ponder “the next step” and then the Author could have had them conclude with The Act, which based on his sterling narrative would have been one to really remember, yes ?
One of the best Mom-Son stories I have ever read. I think you should take it the next level where they go all the way
Another part could be a threesome with Mira and/Or Maria