All Comments on 'Family Planning'

This was a nice break from most of the story lines here . I'm so jaded that I kept waiting for some sinister plot to reveal itself . Lol .

This isn't a typical LW story , but so what , I liked it .

4 *

Sorry, my friend, this just didn't do it for me, didn't seem to be much there.

I, like you, was expecting something, like maybe the kid wasn't his or whatever. Maybe would have fit better in Erotic Couplings?

Would have been nice if there was more of an explanation for why she was "distant" since their anal tryst.

This is in the LW category because? Even if it were in another category it wasn’t good, no plot, no character development, the sex sounds like a teen wrote about what they thought sex was...

Both right. Not really a LW story but a nice read. 3*. Expect more from ThatGuy88. Maybe a chapter 2 could reveal the answers:

But then again I'm not a writer or author like both of you, only a fan.

I do enjoy reading both of your comments and insights on stories.

So how about it ThatGuy88. A little help here...give us the rest of the story....

This actually DOES belong in LW, it's the story of a LOVING wife.

This is a story what many women go through during and after having a baby told quite well.

When her husband couldn’t get the job done! It’s plain as day!!1! Burn the cheating bitch!

Haha. Just kidding. That was my impression of a loon.

For me.

Agree with others, I half expected some twist but wasn't disappointed with the absence of one. But the ending was flat and just seems incomplete. There are some unanswered questions about her sudden frigidity. Is it hormones? Postpartum depression? Something else?

Thanks for sharing and please keep writing.

Wrong category? Where's the straying/cheating aspect?

Not all couples need to cheat. Shows husband can appreciate wife after delivery and want to show live

PURE LOVE AND LUST OF A WIFE AND HUSBAND THAT LOVE EACH OTHER LIKE WHAT MY WIFE HAD I HAD TILL SHE DIED AT A YOUNG AGE OF 54 WE WOULD OF BEEN MARRIED 34 YEARS AND WE MISSED OUR ANNIVERSARY BY 17 DAYS OF OUR 34 YEARS OF LOVING MARRIAGE.BUT I WAS BLESSED WITH A GRANDAUGHTER THAT WAS NAMED AFTER HER GRANDMOTHER THAT THAT I ADORE AND LOVE AS HER GRANDMA WHOM I ALSO ADORED AND LOVED....MAY SHE REST IN PEACE......I LOVE YOU SO MUCH BABY....SEE YOU WHEN I AM READY TO LEAVE.........XOXOXOXOX

Family planning stories are usually like this in LW. This was a good one.