by GeorgiaLoki
Changing tense tripped me up.
Fantastic. More please.
Va Ham
Kinda hoping that the best friend winds up being his second wife and both women are quickly pregnant.
Please hurry up on part 2. Thanks for a great story.
cant wait for the next part!! this was great. I agree with collin4xxx would be hot to see her friend become a wife and pregnant.
Great story with a loving story. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Loved the story. It's not too late to write Part 2