All Comments on 'Family Plans'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Changing tense tripped me up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Fantastic. More please.

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collin4xxxcollin4xxxabout 1 year ago

Kinda hoping that the best friend winds up being his second wife and both women are quickly pregnant.

goodshoes2goodshoes2about 1 year ago

Please hurry up on part 2. Thanks for a great story.

Bry1977Bry1977about 1 year ago

cant wait for the next part!! this was great. I agree with collin4xxx would be hot to see her friend become a wife and pregnant.

FuzzyoldbearFuzzyoldbearabout 1 year ago

Great story with a loving story. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Ilovetophoto68Ilovetophoto686 months ago

Loved the story. It's not too late to write Part 2

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Military Vet having fun remembering fun times both while in and out. I hope you enjoy the content.