All Comments on 'Family Saga Pt. 01'

is dis shit

More than 5 stars, but too fast and lack of modesty & shyness decrease some erotica. Otherwise superb for it's new & exceptional type of presentation. Please carry on & make it a multi-chapter basis family saga by including more conservative minded celeb families with dp, wife-swapping, call-girl profession, nude-dance,forced-incest, incest-children, fetishism, perversion etc. ( Don't mind for my weakness in english ). Thanks & have a nice day.

Never made it past the rape...no thank you

Covered a lot in a very short while, well laid out, easy to follow, can't wait to see where this goes. 5 stars, fave story and fave author. Thanks for a fine effort.

max052

This is my first attempt to write & publish erotic fiction...hell, it is my first attempt to write & publish anything - period. So, I am a beginner & I will accept your feedback to refine my writing technique.

Thanks again!