All Comments on 'Family Secrets - Nights'

You made the main character a son-cuck and be stuck with a family that is filled with hypocrites that must not love him enough to bring him in. How utterly sad.

I really felt sorry for the Sai as everyone else are fucking and they keep him in the dark.

I want to like this story but Sai made no progress and it would have been better to make him withdrawn and family trying to figure out why.

Right now I didn't like the direction this story has gone.

Looks good, hope to see more. I enjoy stories where the son finds out his family is having orgies and keeps him in the dark with their secret lifestyle. Hope you update soon! Don't keep me in suspense.

Everyone is getting pussy but the youngest what a shock if sai doesn't get any pussy in chapter 2 please don't make another because why make a story if your main character is on the sidelines just looking

This is only a set up to the story, the next chapter will expand more and explain why Sai wasn't involved.

Speed things up already

The audacity ! why cant sai fuck one of the friends or aunty but john can? Fuck that what a trash mom sai should fuck everybody else but her

Pretty good premise and some nice writing here. But you changed from first to third person a couple times. Please fix this.

I hope they are humiliated by Sai when it comes out that he knows and leaves them not that they seem to care!

@homerjay I changed from first to third to see how it'll look I might stick to 3rd in the next chapters.

Would like to see him do the cucking

Defenetly needs more chapters, can't wait for the next keep it up.

Damn the Mom is hot! Gave you 5 stars but... need Sai and Mom time asap!

not really good nobody but weirdo's wants to read about a son cuck who is the main character, I would delete and start over

Fantastic story. Keep it up

You make a great story be happy for yourself!!!

Make Sai the dominator, if you want him as the main character, let him fuck all Female teachers, principals, teens, church pastors wife's, daughters, church girls, build him a reputation of being the best in the female circle, show it as such that he only uses them for sex and care but not love or anything, make him so good that no-one can handle him for a long time, then bring the parents in picture

Make Sai just to watch for a bit longer

Great story...!But I think there's unnecessary sexual acts in it.Would have loved it if the elder son and son acted normal in the morning.Then there's the car scene.And a blowjob before religious meeting.

Fantastic description of mom,great rapport with all the family members , really believable characters.

Definately write part 2 or write a new story with same family.

Thanks for the story.

When can we see the next chapter?

Awesome Story. Eagerly waiting for the next part

Great work man! Keep them coming. Pun intended...lol!

It would be more erotic with indian names. Would love to read later parts.

Nice

You should include how the family reached into that point. I think it would be great

Re-reading this story I noticed a typo at the end.

"I'm gonna go clean up, I'll see you two after service," Lisa added, giving John a kiss on the lips. Leaving, to the bathroom attached to the office after grabbing her clothes.

"Come here," Ann said, as she pulled John to her, giving him a kiss on the cheeks, just like Lisa.

"Now behave!" Ann added, reaching for her clothes.

"I will, I promise," John replied.

"Good," Lisa said with a motherly smile.

"Until..." John started saying, as he finished putting on his clothes.

I accidentally put "Lisa said with a motherly smile." Instead of "Ann said, with a motherly smile." I don't know if others noticed that but I apologise for the mistake.

I Frelling hate things left like this even if a sequel is on the way

This is ONE FUCKED UP STORY...you drag out all this shit, there is obviously more going on than meets the eye, and you, "author" have to be Ssssoool OBTUSE a out all of it...

I do understand what is going on, but it is too circumferential....get to the point...

**3** stars, at best...could be worse...

The writing was fucked seemed like it was rushed there is 1 part that could make for interesting story line if wrote properly and that's explaining in detail though not to much detail on why the mother gets jealous when girls flrit with her other son si but she doesn't want to bring him in to the secret

Well... this was highly dissatisfying! Four pages of a guy being actively excluded from the family fun, without any kind of explanation as to why. And then no update für months. This should be illegal.

What a load of shit and u didn’t bother to finish it either.

Scores 1/5

This was very good. Hope the sequel is out soon. This has potential to be one of the best series in this site.

If the mood strikes you, how about you give us some background on this excellent family and their friends and lovers.

Kudos.

just a word to say, i hope this autot has already died of covid for writing so much rubbish, cuckold fetish, his wife and daughters must be gangbanged every day

A good story, but I hope it makes sai dominant. Make him revolt and give them a good scare.

So, when is the next chapter coming?

@keki123 Not for a while. I'm working on different story right now, that I'm using as writing exercise for this story. This was my first very first story, and there's a lot of mistakes and faults in it. Right now, I'm trying to improve my writing so that I can rewrite this story and put out a much better story.

@Sai_dias_29 Thanks for replying. All the best. Hope you come up with a better sequel.

Simple cuck story.

My eyes are bleeding.

Hi Sai_dias_29., So have written 4 chapters already. When are you going to post them?

@keki123 It's shelved for now. I kept getting stuck, and annoyed and what not. The next story that I can promise WILL come soon, is Awakening Pt2.

@Sai_dias_29 when is the next part coming out please I want to read it

Good story. Eagerly waiting for part 2.

I see a son that will leave and never talk to anybody in his family, ever.

You lost me a little with all the stuff at the end there. But I would like to see Sai get his mother. I like that she's jealous and wants him for herself.