All Comments on 'Family Shock: Home for the Holidays'

Story about her back at school as a new wife

I'd love to see both of the sequels you mentioned as well as read what her life was like once they go back to school. Don't forget about her parents, I'll bet her Dad secretly wants to be spit roasted! 😉

Fun and light, sexy fun times. Definitely would enjoy reading more chapters. Family orgy. Family wedding. Perhaps even a chapter exploring the seduction of Selina's mother which you alluded to (and perhaps others in her family).

Yes please - Fantastic Story!

If you continue the saga, “Eatin good in the Neighborhood “ really needs to be a title! Or at least a subtitle!!

Applebee’s is a chain of restaurants in the States....possibly some in Canada as well... and that IS the slogan! It seems.........appropriate!

I want more please!

Always need more from you please and thank you

Great story, cant wait for the sequels to this

Both ideas are good and I hope you included her mother and father both getting spit roasted I’m shore you will come up with a very hot way brake her church going parents

Keep up your great work

More in this series please!

This definitely needs sequels to finish it as it's just too good to be a one off

You need to write the sequels quickly. Great story.

I second the reference to 'Bride Submission'.

Perhaps Brittany and family will be at the wedding?

I'd have liked to have seen Max take his GF and leave. Or better yet never take her home. This 'Order' strikes me like the mafia or any other GANG. Once you're in you're stuck for life. Not a good thing.

Please give us some more. I love all that you write!

Thank you for sharing both your talent and erotic mind with us!

Of course more chapters!! Including Selinas mom being introduced to the females 1st!! 😈🔥

Someone commented that the organization that the characters were a part of is a bad thing and in real life, yes it would be a terrible thing. However, in fantasy world it was super hot. Thanks for writing this and looking forward to the other mom being initiated into the family too.

please write more chapters and maybe have selina taken through her pantyhose. Maybe in a future chapter have her get pregnant by max or derek.

Yes!! keep it going. Love your stories!!

More chapters ASAP.

Getvthe next one out soon!! Great story.

Oh yes, this needs to be continued ! After marriage she and Max are ordered to seduce her parents !

Absolutely looking forward to more! 5 stars!

Yes, continue the story.......please.

Absolutely continue

The wedding

And then

The reception orgy

Always enjoy your stories

Please continue

Have her mother seduced

I can only imagine

Absolutely bonkers and I loved it. Yes, the story line might be a little repetitive and far fetched but it is fiction and many stories do repeat themes. I think it's well written.

Definitely should be continued and would like her mother included although what do you do about her father. Does Selina have any siblings? Also bring in the society at school / uni.

Of course we want more!

I will say that I would enjoy seeing Max and Selina working on turning her family too. Would be very fun to watch it from the other side.

Another excellent contribution!

Spanksgiving is #1 for this season but this is a very close second! Good job on introducing how slutty Selina could be, in consideration of her upbringing. For the Appleby family, they work well together. I would like to see the wedding next where Selina's mom is turned by Max's mom? grandmother? the bride?

Love your writing and these 2 stories demonstrate your talent at its best.

I would have liked to see more angst, more indecision, on the part of Max. The build up was really tense, but that conflict didn’t seem fully resolved.

Great work. Well written and 'entirely' plausible. ;-0

Nice story. As to future ideas, if I counted right, 29 out of 139 commentors wanted Selina's family seduced, more specifically her mom, and even more specifically for her to eat pussy, namely Selina's pussy. This is approximately twenty percent. Extrapolated to your total reads, around 8400 readers would like to see Selina turn her mother. While all future suggestions seem good, this seems to be the most desired one. Hope you make it happen.

This story has yet to run its full course. This roller coaster of a story needs to go on to its final stop. Create more twists and turns. Lookiing forward to your creative running. Good luck.

I loved this story. Your talent is amazing. I would have like to have seen all this happen over breakfast for the sheer build up but loved it regardless.

Please keep writing. I have yet to read one of your stories that I did not enjoy

It was great. I want more! Please and thank you.

Definitely looking forward to more!

Yes. Definitely more please. And bring Selina's family to the wedding or before that.

yes please more would love to read more about the adventures of the newly engaged couple and family

Great start on a whole new series of stories cant wait to see and read more of this series, Mark

I want to read about Jane's seduction of Selina's mom, and then about Selina drilling her father with a strap-on! Justice!!!

Thanks for the newest Order of Syndom story! It's by far my favorite concept in Literotica, I really would love 100 more stories in this universe. Please write more, I'll read them ASAP!!

Thanks, this is a really good story, and the fact you take time to create art like this for us for free is appreciated greatly.

Please continue, I’d love to read more about Selina’s mother being turned into a submissive slut in front of her husband!

Keep writing!! This story line could easily keep at least two installments going. Hopefully more.

Pls more

...and hoping for a soon Part II with Selina's mom and Selina's younger siblings being converted...

Weird, but very sexy.

Really looking forward to the next installment

Loved it ! Please more

I like the idea of the family Christmas eve party/engagement party/rehearsal party/wedding/reception/submission to Syndom party, intermixed with the seduction of Selina's mom, and then about Selina drilling her mother with a strap-on! while dad watches and Selina's younger siblings being converted.

Love this story! I mean you’re always good but this one is especially great! (Not just saying this as a girl raised by emotionally and physically withholding parents who became a slut in college). PLEASE write those sequels!! Want to see what other fun they get up to before going back to school! (And i’d love to read a story about syndom members at college.

I want to read "Family Shock: Incestuous Orgy"!!!

Loved it ! Please more

I like the idea of the family Christmas eve party/engagement party/rehearsal party/wedding/reception/submission to Syndom party, intermixed with the seduction of Selina's mom, and then about Selina drilling her mother with a strap-on! while dad watches and Selina's younger siblings being converted.

Would love to see a sequel!

Always an incredibly orgasmic story when you write.

Where are the sequels /). Would love to see how Derek turns and spit roast Selins’a mum

i love it the incestous family sex and all the silkstockingslover stories as well makes me hot and horny,thank you.

Please continue!

Please don't continue this. It totally sucked.

YES, YES, YES...PLEASE WRITE THE 'ORGY' AND 'WEDDING' SEQUELS...continue with these to start a new series...

ScottishTexan should be ashamed of himself...I have seen some of his posts, and am quite disappointed he would be so rude...

🌠🌠🌠🌠🌠🌠🌠🌠🌠🌠-So Well Done...please write more...😈💥💘💞💋💋💋

Amazingly demented, sweet, sexy, romantic, and tweaked beyond belief! Loved it!!!!

Loved this story and hope to read more like it!

Don't let this be the end of this saga.

Yes it’s so hot you need to continue the hot sexy story

I want to marry into that family. Pure porn!

This is such an amazing story! Please continue it!

244. This was so innovative, and everyone wants it to continue, so why is there no sequel?

With the holidays approaching, I'm going to bump the request to continue this story!

Yes we need : Family Shock: Incestuous Orgy and Family Shock: Syndom

very very soon Wedding

Waiting on the wedding and any other Syndom stories. Love it!!

Look forward to the family orgy and wedding. Want to read about turning her family as well as hinted at.

Fairly hot 🥵 but way too un realistic .

Bill S.

That was so hot. I'd love to see this continue.

More please!

Please more. Corrupt her family too.

Waiting for chapter 2

Yes, this is going great. Can't wait for the extended family gathering. And if we are heading for a Syndom wedding, the mother of the bride MUST attend. And maybe siblings? The father of the bride is a lost cause. Can't wait to see where you go with this.

One commentator wrote "your talent is amazing", they have got to be shitting everyone. Who the hell can't write the shit that this writer does. A grade school pervert can write this crap. Talent...what a joke.

Amazing story. Please please write the next part

Nicely done oh Mistress of Silk, though I feel her introduction to the family traditions and The Order would have been better served with a two day burn instead of a 2 hour flash fried inferno (over the course of one dinner) both time and seduction wise. The awakening of one's true nature of submissiveness and her willingness to "cheat" on the man she supposedly loves (especially the family aspect) would naturally be a big internal struggle in the beginning.

Total garbage, thank god it was only a short "story"

gloriously decadent! HOWEVER,,,i would have enjoyed had it been fleshed out more,,salinas' total immediate acceptance of the family secret was highly suspect,,more to the point,,unacceptable..

I'm guessing that because of the negative comments, you did a illustrated version of this instead of a sequel. Ignore them as you did a great job here. Those of you who are criticizing her, I want you to try writing a story and see how hard it is to write something as great like this. I will go and read/watch the new version next and if it is as great as this read version, I think you should definitely do the sequel when you have a chance. I also noticed that your story count went down by one. Which story got nucked, and are you doing it over and rereleasing it?

Интересная история, разве что странно, что Селина так быстро всё приняла...

More please.. I think it was a great story well written and definitely got me excited (which is rare lol) I would love to read more about this secret sex order lol

Definately want the next sequals.

Another 5 Star Story, Wow!!I'd love to see Selinas Mom cum over for a visit,And get Drawn into The Order..Mom becoming a Sub

Just like her Daughter. 👅🔥🥵🫦🍆

Amazing story, ignore the jealous haters, never change.