All Comments on 'Family Shock: Home for the Holidays'

I was always sad that you never continued the stories set in this universe. Yes, please continue.

Absolutely wonderful, so totally depraved and blissed up, pure unbridled fuck lust. Fabulous cunt lapping and outrageous mind blowing sexual pleasure with nothing off limits. Omg what would I not give to be part of this orgy of pure unadulterated sex, unlimited cunt. Eating cunt and fucking cunt at the same time. More and more and soon, like yesterday Jasmine , I absolutely love it. Cunt crazed sex maniac Lanc’s UK.

For sure want it to continue. Always love your stories!

...and get Selina’s mother involved.

Yet another fantastic sexy story. This storyline has great potential. Thank you

More please

What a great read. I always enjoy your style, and this was no exception. Erotic, sexy, and light hearted. My personal vote is both chapters or a combined setup of both scenarios. Thank you

I would love to read another part. 5 stare as always.

Please continue with both the titles you suggest above

Please continue the story!!!

hope you do more with this, need to get her mother involved!!

One of your best works yet! As for sequels, I would love to read both of them. Keep up the amazing work, and I look forward to seeing you how continue the series.

6⭐️S! Please continue the saga.....🔥❤️🔥

That was hot from start to finish! To even imagine there could be a secret society like that where you get to enjoy pussy and cock anytime in a safe environment. Selina is a lucky girl! Have to say, I’m envious!!! I love your submissions please keep expanding on this story, would love to read more of her and Max’s sexventures.

Great story! Can’t wait doe the next installment. Either one would be great and both would be better!

Continue with the seduction and induction of the future mother in law

Please share more. I love your stories and all the details you share.

Either or both of your ideas for sequels sound hot.

Would love to read both of the next parts and more. Great story!!!!

Continue the story. Both ideas would be great especially if you could incorporate the mother in law

Never have I disliked one of your stories before but this one really turned me off. I kept wanting Max to jump over and kill Derek for completely violating his desires, body autonomy, and being a selfish prick in general. No wonder he wanted out. That being said both your writing style and structure were wonderful as always!

Continue please. Very nice

Love to read the family orgy idea. If it's a hit, part 3: the wedding

Great story! I'd love to see what happens next.

Reading this just reminded me that there was no conclusion to BRIDE’S SUBMISSION.

Wish you would do more stories about The Order as they’re always a great read.

keep it coming.. get her mother...

Yes, please keep going

Hell, Yeah!!! Go for it!!! Go for them both!!!

Once again a very hot story full of depraved and illegal sex between the family members. This could go in so many directions but I’m sure you’ll come up with something that pleases all your devoted readers

FUCK YESSS!!!!!

As usual a brilliant, super sexy story, Jasmine. God, girl you do have a vivid, dirty mind. Yes, we do want you to continue with this series and use both titles, however, you must include Selina's mother, DPed and eating out her daughter at the same time. I absolutely love and enjoy all your tales and would love to have been able to participate in any of them, especially the incest, lesbian and gang-bang stories. I was always curious about my middle brother and the vast number of girl-friends he went through, sadly he now lives in Japan, with his wife and aged father-in-law, so that fantasy has gone. No 5 stars this time, deserves 7.

more! More!! MORE!!!

An original twist and very creative. Thanks for sharing this story.

Did you really have to ask? To us (Lance, Roxy and Bev) it’s a no brainer that you would extend this into a series! As we lay in bed this morning reading this it was clear that this has to be the start of a excitingly new and fresh epic. Selina and Max have a platform for no end of sexy fun and it would be a travesty to not continue.

Five stars from each of us in this bed, so fifteen gold stars and a favourite.

Jasmine, we three look forward to much more!!!

We all send our love and the girls send you special Christmas licks! 😋😋 Lol!

please continue story

Agree that Selina’s mother needs to be seduced and inducted into the order.

A woman who was (likely also) taught that sex is only allowed within the confines of marriage and only for procreation may have some naughty repressed feelings to discover and explore.

Can I be adopted into this great family? Super writing and terrific tale; PLEASE continue in the usual Silkstockingslover style.

Absolutely continue. Can’t wait!!!!!

Keep it going it very sexy

Without a doubt continue. Three are so many story line branches thacould be added.

This is a great story! I wish there were really orders of this nature. I would join in a heartbeat!

Your wrote another great story as normal and I would love to see another two or three chapters in the saga about Selina.

marklion

While entertaining it got over the top during the last half, especially how quickly Selina adapted to things.

It’s the same old same old....give it a rest it’s old

Too soon to stop.

Keep going with it, do the wedding then the orgy reception

Good start :)

Look forward to reading more...

Yes more from this family and the new bride to be. I love the story.

Totally hot. More, please and definitely want the religious family-in-law to be seduced.

I just started reading your story with the start of

This one and glad I did.

1st. Is there a prequel to the Order of Syndom that

I missed and how It was formed and Max's family

Was Inducted?

2nd. After the wedding, orgy etc stories as a

Follow up, you must have Max's future mother in law

Brought into the Order of Syndom.

Thanks for writing.

More please...Gotta see it through to the end...:)

this was fun! more, please!

Please continue the story.

Give it up...your tales of slut moms and sons as their dominating masters has run its course...it’s got old

Chapters of brides mother getting used, orgy chapter and then a wedding chapter. MORE PLEASE!

This was amazing and I will read any more you have in a heartbeat. I would love to see all the nasty things this family gets up too whether it be double penetrations, Triple penetrations, rimming, ass to pussy or ass to mouth and any crazy sex position you can think of. It would be so hot if Selinas mother gets involved too.

No secrets, no cheating, no insulting someone's religion...are we still on Literotica?

Great story, you've made erotica fun again...good job!

Excellent as always!'

I'd love to see a sequel. My vote goes for the wedding.

This has the makings of a great series told by one of

Literotica's best authors.

I loved it and would love more and for this to become a series!

Looking forward to the family orgy. Thanks for sharing.

This should get illustrated

Excellent story as usual Jasmine, you certainly are one dirty girl, wrapping up all one's fantasies and desires in one story. Many years ago, as a teenager, I wondered just what attracted an endless stream of good-looking girls to my brother, then coming home from Uni one summer I saw him in his swimwear, God he looked huge and for months that picture made me sopping wet. Sadly he now lives in Japan with his wife and her aging father, so I have missed out on him. Yes, continue Salina's story, there is so much potential here, but you must, must turn her mum into a total three-hole slut, preferably at their wedding. No 5 stars this time, its a ten from me.

Incest stories don't usually interest me but this is HOT!

Is the Pope a Catholic? Do bears shit in the woods? Yes! Yes! Yes! Please Jasmine hurry up and get Max and Selina married. To think that I tended to avoid stories about incest! This is so hot. I do hope you manage to get Selina's mother initiated too. She'll have joined after Selina, and that puts her lower down the pecking order. I'd love to read about Selina strapping on and fucking her mother in a future chapter. Thanks, Jasmine. Keep up the good work. 5 stars, naturally.

For more more more, please

Please write more of this! It was so good and holy fuck did it make me cum. All the family fucking sounds awesome and you should also write at least one chapter about their exploits on their campus.

Hi honey I loved it

Pure fantasy and that is what I like

Slow build great climax omg I just love your mind xxx

Love. Carmella x

Ps I want to read about Selena mum getting used xx

Of course I want to read more. After all, Selina's bigot family still has to be involved. I can't wait to read how Selina's mom is turned into a lesbian cock-sucking slut who is submissive to the whole Order of Syndom, including her daughter Selina.

Another great story by one of Literotica's most talented and impressive storytellers. A great story, as always, of sex and incest with just the right amount of D/s wrapped in delightful characters.

Please do expand into a series! Can’t wait to read about the family orgy and the couple’s return to campus.

I know I will enjoy reading more if you decide to write it.

Great story! Well-written, as always, with engaging characters. Maybe Selina will be sent to seduce her father by sucking him off, then convincing him to fuck her? Maybe her mother wasn't getting oral from him, so he needs some training from the the women of Selina's new family?

What about a background chapter, focussing on the immediate and extended family before coming back to the present for the orgy?

Wonderfully arousing and twisted. You've already inspired a few potential spinoffs in tribute. Looking forward to many more in this universe!

More please!! This was crazy but interesting .. once you start you can’t stop !

Love the story please write some more

Thank you for another great story!

I have been reading your stories for a very long time. Each one better than the last. This absolutely is my favorite one. Selina is begging for inclusion and affection. She has found her rightful place and wouldn't dream of leaving. Please, please decide to compose a Chapter 2 of the incestual dreamland. Her submissiveness is just begging to be further explored.

Total fantasy! But delightfully erotic! Yes, more would be nice. But will you follow through, Jasmine? The only sequel I want to see is Selina's mother being taken to sexual ecstasy. As for an orgy with the Order, it actually sounds pretty boring. But before any sequel to this tale, I'd like to see the end of the Turning Contest. How can we trust you to continue this while the Turning Contest and other series remain unfinished? If you were in my class, Teacher Jasmine, you'd get an "I" for Incomplete and have to come to my office to learn how to change the "I" into an "A" as in The Scarlet Letter! On your knees, Slut! Suck my cock to full erection before I fill your ass with my hot cum! You need to thank me for the 5 stars.

I only made it through the second page and found you had stretched credulity beyond any point I could appreciate. It became total fantasy in my mind and I couldn't read on with any interest. It's my own POV and not anything you have done. I acknowledge you write well and many of your stories I do enjoy as even I do write incest once in a while. I just can't accept a whole family involved in incest and hiding it sufficiently to avoid legal consequences. Therefore I won't be awarding this one any points.

Silk Stocking Lover delivers again. Fun story. More chapters. Especially her mother getting drilled, spit roasted and water tight while her uptight father is forced to watch

Great beginning , looking forward to the rest of the story

Selina and mother&sister in law using her prudish parents. Slut Selina pegging her father in church perhaps? Jasmine thank you for sharing your talent.

I, for one, would LOVE to read more.

Either of the follow-on titles you suggested would be awesome. :)

You never disappoint! Loved it!

Please continue this story line.

Let’s have Selina’s mom shown the lesbian love of in-laws and become a pet for the bride!

Can’t wait for the next chapters

Would love more

More please.

Beautiful story. You are a master storyteller.

Great story. The only difficulty is the lesbian daisy chain did not actually switch directions when Jane called for it.

Very nice, I think the orgy would be a great continuation. Is there a list of your stories that involve the order of syndom?? i like the idea. Thanks

Excellent story! We quite enjoyed it, and are looking forward to many more.

Now to figure out how to join a family like that!

........Lots More!!!!!

More more more please

More order stories please

This is definitely one of your better stories and I for one would love to see the sequel to it soon. Would also love to see a chapter where Selina fucks her brother and mother as well.

Yes please do both!!!!! Love the story and the way you told it