All Comments on 'Family Ties Ch. 04'

this is a great series and a brilliant take on family bdsm, id like to see more aspect of the bdsm and you could elaborate more with the pee fetish you touched upon. but other than that you got it nailed, very enjoyable.

This, like all of this writers many previous postings represents good pornographic writing--something that is difficult to do well. He succeeds admirably.

Your stories are all right (better than okay but not as good as great). However, your spelling is definitely (not defiantly) a-t-r-o-c-i-o-u-s. You also could use some help with commas and apostrophes.

This does not mean I am not enjoying the stories. I am enjoying them and can't wait to see what happens next.

Great story. Really liked the last few lines. Nothing llike surprising people