All Comments on 'Family Tradition of Bondage Pt. 02'

by SavannahMann

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joodlejoodlealmost 12 years ago
Very engaging

This story is very different from your typical bdsm slave conversion pieces. Normally the master starts out as a practiced Dom, experienced and confident, with all the equipment. Robert exerts confidence, but seems to be on the eager side. Though his manner during the scheduling of dinner and his contract proposal definitely shows a confident and smooth transition into the Dom every woman craves. The editing still needs refining, but considering this is an older story, it doesn't matter much. Reading on....

spearishspearishalmost 11 years ago
Completely hooked

Loving the build up and it's quite unique start.

kiwiplumkiwiplumalmost 11 years ago
Pity

Itll be interesting to see if you can make this guy into something other than the faceless character you've given him so far. Surey we have to like him a little bit? She's not like able but quite believable at least.

Subliminal messages? Really?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
I would like to be--

I'll never tell

SashiraSashiraover 6 years ago
rather unlikely

not just a lawyer but i think any woman faced with that situation would want more detail on what constituted 'slave' @ 26 yo she should know about all the really sick bastids out there who would do permanent damage to your body,get you hooked on drugs [she already is a problem drinker], torture you for fun and giggles and maybe even go too far and kill her cover up the crime and no one would know @ the very least she should have written/taped all info down about him she knew put all that info he'd given her along with it for proof saying if i end up missing he did it mail it to herself from one of those office postal places for security so at least the asshole wouldn't get away with her murder

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