All Comments on 'Family Trip to Grandma's Ch. 02'

Loved the story and can't wait for the next chapter

I agree ch3 soon

great story with good hot sex so far-nice build-up thanks for a nicely written tale

he should have let her hold him longer to see her next move I think she would have had to have hiscock

They should be able to catch all of your verb tense and spelling errors!

I see you managed to stay with third person, now you need to stay with one tense. You switched to present a a few times, but mostly you wrote past tense; good choice, present is hard to stay with throughout the story. Still got grammar and proofreading problems.

wow that is hot seems that boy will soon B very luckey with boath woman fiteing over him

Good story. Story appears to be logically developed. I am some what surprised by the lack of self-assurance, self-confidence and self-awareness of the main characters, to wit: grandmother, mother and son.