All Comments on 'Family Turmoil Ch. 01'

by MidnightPolaris

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Rocketman51Rocketman51about 5 years ago
Great first story

A good start to a series, hoping dad gets to join in at some point! Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Not incest

And not very interesting or believable either

DougntexasDougntexasabout 5 years ago

To many mistakes and spelling errors plus his Dad said he was staying a few days and next thing u know he has a early morning flight to catch.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Vivid Image

Some reason, the story gave me a vivid Image of the scene. Always had a thing for forebidden women. A strong four. Wet, for a 5. Let's hear another revenge kitty chapter.

linnearlinnearalmost 3 years ago
Wow

Hard to believe that is your first story. It was pretty damn hot, few grammar errors but nothing to bad. Looking forward to seeing more of your work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

lol, so a dude sleeps with a woman with 0 morals. Big whoop. Same effect for a 5 buck whore, only the dude is too cheap to even dish that much out.

Revenge? lol. Boy toys don't get revenge. Dildos aren't vengeance.

More teenage adolescent crap.

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