All Comments on 'Family Vacation'

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DunkirkDunkirkover 2 years ago

She should show hubby the baby bump Walt gave her once they got home.

ammon17ammon17over 2 years ago

Amazing, and deservingly lengthy. Quality work. Made me interested enough to speed read through it, rather than just skim. Top notch, to the point that it feels like someone's real life vacation experiences!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Wow, I thought your Ocean Breezes was the hottest story I had ever read, until I read this one. Ended up reading it to my sweet hubby in bad. We got halfway through the pool scene and we got *distracted*. Lots of fun, very realistic, sounds like a great vacation. Oh, hubby and I are saving Mandy's list to take on our next vacation. Hot, Hot, Hot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great job! action packed

MrGates801MrGates801over 2 years ago

A bit sad that we didn't get Matt with the front desk clerk, but a great story still.

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Rumor has it I'm pretty good at role playing, looking to explore that a bit. Don't have a sister or a step mom so I guess I'm stymied creatively in those areas. My stories are typically told from her perspective, while my role play is often me as the white male in control. ...