All Comments on 'Family Weekend Ch. 07: Off The Bench'

Outsiders in a Taboo/incest story will kill it for me

The story is ALL about taboo and incest. There are no outsiders, each character is woof in the warp. If the events are not explicitly 'incest' they are certainly 'taboo' by virtue of the power dynamics and age differences involved. I hope it is not 'spoiled' for you, even if the 'seasoning' is not quite to your taste. :-) MP2

Hi MP2, the story as you are steering it now is losing the dynamic I was certainly enjoying with Claude Sally and Nel. I have no idea who Derek is or why Sally is doing him outside the relationship she has with Claude and Nel.

It is your story and you are free to take it where you wish. I will keep an eye on later chapters to see if they interest me again. Thanks for the bits I have enjoyed though. Top story.

You know I always appreciate feedback. Life is complex and I tell the story as it is. There are several people we are 'tracking'... Megan, John, Nel and Claude are COMING again in the next chapter. :-) MP2

Sorry for the delay, Turtle, my friend. Look for the Cabin Campers in Ch. 09. MP2

Derek clearly show's a major character flaw picking college's - but, the story is still very hot! 5 more stars.

Derek’s recruiting choices are unknown in the story. In fact, it is unknown how strong a ball player he is. Maybe Corvallis was his best/only option out of a negative Windy City environment. His tale has yet to be told ... thanks for the stars. MP2 :-)

in the Windy City beats going to cow college. you haven't convinced me yet MP Derek's making a good call!