All Comments on 'Fang of Control Ch. 02'

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zena99zena99almost 3 years ago

Chapter 1 : Amazing. Chapter 2: Fantastic. Chapter 3: ?

illuminatio2dragonisilluminatio2dragonisalmost 3 years ago

Very entertaining! Waiting for Chapter 3.

mlrsdpicmmlrsdpicmover 2 years ago

Good basic story, still rushed. A little more imagination would make it so much better.

Stormwalker10027Stormwalker100276 months ago

great concept but it is very rushed and lazy. you also need more detail during the sex scenes. Not just 'i unloaded in her 3 times'.

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