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Stormwalker10027Stormwalker100277 months ago

great concept but it is very rushed and lazy. you also need more detail during the sex scenes. Not just 'i unloaded in her 3 times'.

mlrsdpicmmlrsdpicmover 2 years ago

Good basic story, still rushed. A little more imagination would make it so much better.

illuminatio2dragonisilluminatio2dragonisalmost 3 years ago

Very entertaining! Waiting for Chapter 3.

zena99zena99almost 3 years ago

Chapter 1 : Amazing. Chapter 2: Fantastic. Chapter 3: ?

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