All Comments on 'Fangs at Fasching'

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bienclarbienclarover 1 year ago

Having the protagonist be horny for Nazis was…a choice. The actual sex was surprisingly anaemic, almost perfunctory despite the constant assurances of how kinky everyone involved was. I guess that makes sense for an addict who’s just scratching an itch. Overall not your best work, but still serviceable. The biggest mark against you was repeatedly talking about the protagonist being “a satyriasis”, which makes no sense – he HAS satyriasis meaning he would BE “a satyriac”.

sr71pltsr71pltover 1 year agoAuthor

Thanks for the suggestion on "satyriac." I can't find anything that recognizes it as a word, which is why I use the one I do. But thanks anyway.

geemeedeegeemeedeeover 1 year ago

Cool story. I hope you continue with Terry!

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