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Despite his powers, Wraithskater is driven by a strong sense of justice and a desire to protect those who cannot protect themselves. He grapples with the ethical implications of using his Dominaura power and strives to balance responsible use of his abilities with his pursuit of justice. His past is shrouded in mystery, but one thing is certain: Wraithskater will tirelessly fight for justice, using his remarkable abilities to make the world a better place.

L'Ombreteur is a complex and enigmatic character who exists simultaneously in two parallel worlds, each with a distinct form. Bound together by the shadows that serve as the boundary between dimensions, the Wraithsborder, they are a dual entity that defies conventional definitions of good and evil.

Imagine two parallel planes with a nexus defined by and moving with L'Ombreteur. Their vulnerability is that, whereas other reflectoids can exist in separate coordinates on each realm, L'Ombreteur must always exist in the same spatial coordinates in either realm no matter how they travel within each universe. This means that if one knows the location of L'Ombreteur in The Mirropality, you could find them at exactly the same place in the Echodom, provided you could traverse the space between the universes. It also means that they are somehow entangled within the Wraithsgate.

In the Mirropality, L'Ombreteur appears as a tall, brooding man with a lean and muscular build, sharp facial features, and piercing eyes that hold a wealth of hidden secrets. He has deep black hair slicked back, and he dons a form-fitting suit made of shadows that seem to blend into the darkness around him.

In the Echodom, L'Ombreteur takes the form of a captivating woman with an air of mystery and power. She has long, flowing deep red hair that seems to have a life of its own, and her eyes are just as intense and enigmatic as her male Refectoid's. She wears a dress crafted from the same shadowy material as the male version's suit, which clings to her curves and moves fluidly with her every motion.

Driven by a desire to possess the Dominaura power, L'Ombreteur seeks to control and manipulate others for their own ends. They are immune to the influence of the Dominaura, due to their unique existence that prevents them from being touched simultaneously in both worlds. This has not yet been made clear in the series which again leads to fan speculation. This immunity was discovered at their first meeting with the Wraithsgater.

In the Echodom, Wraithsgater remains a man, and his relationship with the original form of L'Ombreteur in that world played a pivotal role in the creation of the dual existence they now share. The change in the name is how we know which world we are in. He is The Wraithsgater on Materdusk and Wraithskater on Earth. L'Ombreteur's motivations and actions are driven by the experiences and perspectives of both their male and female forms, creating a multi-layered antagonist.

Their complexity and dual nature serve as a catalyst for deeper discussions about morality, the justification of actions, and whether the ends really justify the means. They are a nemesis that I hope can engage readers in an exploration of the intricate nature of the characters and their beliefs.

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MargotPaygeMargotPayge11 months agoAuthor

Thank You. I appreciate you letting me know.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Very nice job on your first story !!

MargotPaygeMargotPayge11 months agoAuthor

Thank You so much. FMM and Fmm with or without any sort of dominant role for the female is a huge turn-on for me. I go to that well very often. But I find I like it best when the men are willing, open, and experimental. I imagine it is similar to a man wanting to be with two women and watch them explore each other's bodies.

My brain has been hijacked from this particular series for the moment, but I will return to these characters and Wraithskater as soon as I am released from The Bisexual Tendril Machine. (Note the shameless plug for my other series.)

MargotPaygeMargotPayge11 months agoAuthor

Thank you. I hope you do and look forward to reading it.

Milo_GrigsbyMilo_Grigsby11 months ago

Devastatingly erotic and delightfully set in the venue of a Con, which I am quite familiar with.

I have considered writing a MMF-bi piece and you may have nudged me into doing it.

MargotPaygeMargotPayge11 months agoAuthor

Thank You. If you like it, feel free to follow me. I may write some more using these characters. I may even write the background Wraithskater series.

Wonderer67Wonderer6711 months ago

Nicely written. I’m not very familiar with the comic book genre, but it was good nonetheless.

Nice job!!

MargotPaygeMargotPayge12 months agoAuthor

Telly-ness. Yes. Every time I went through it, I would try to find a phrase and substitute some action that showed what I had just said. "Sweat started to stain her armpits." Instead of "It was Hot." Is that what you mean?

It takes soooo much longer to do that in a story than a poem and I ran out of time. I knew I'd get more views if I could make the deadline: over 4.6K as of this date. That was my measure of success.

Thank you for your thoughtful and thought provoking comment.

-M-

PureoticaPureotica12 months ago

I gave this a quick read, and will try to give more careful attention when I have time.

I'm aware of the genre but not knowledgeable. I've read very little MM and haven't written it yet. For feedback on that aspect of the story, I defer to more knowledgeable fans.

In terms of technical proficiency, your writing is solid. If I fine tooth comb this, I could find words to trim, but in general your prose is clean and readable. It flows nicely.

You use a lot of "tell-y" language and techniques and could write more impactful prose by learning to "show" more. The same is true about most writers on the site. Show vs tell is an advanced skill, and something I'm still learning to master. My suggestion is by no means a broad criticism of your ability. You indicate that you're open to feedback and learning opportunities.

I'll try to give this a more careful read when I can. I'm procrastinating from my Nude Day project and should get back to it. I'll rate after I've read it fully.

I think the glossary and background information at the end is a nice touch.

Best success in your future projects.

MargotPaygeMargotPayge12 months agoAuthor

I could certainly bring these characters back, if enough people liked it.

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