All Comments on 'Fantasia Concordat Ch. 01'

Going to add you to favourites, so I can keep an eye on the series.

good start, looking forward to the next one.

I enjoyed the read. helps to pass time over here. I'm on deployment. always good to read something just for beat off material

Starts off like one of the many genie stories on the site, loner finds a thing, hot girl pops out, you know the drill. Though I like the things you did differently here. The grimoire's maifestation being a tsundere is a big change from the norm. Also, the idea that this guy has this flaw/injury that he's quietly desperate to correct is a character trait that you don't see very often; it leads me to believe that he has some layers, something many protagonists in these kinds of stories don't. It's a good read, and I'm interested to see where it goes.

Havent really seen anything like this on here not alot of good wizard stories on this site and its off to a really good start cant wait to read more

I hope you keep up the writing. This was a realy good start to what I hope will be a long story.

Although it moved a bit fast (as most first chapters often do) I enjoyed this thoroughly. Thus far, the writing is fluid and pleasing to read, but I'm more impressed by the main character's handicap and the very a-typical girl you've paired him with. I'm interested to see where this story goes.

I'll Be Watching - Galloglaich

so far i like it.

Some hentai influences, I see? :3

That was an impressive first chapter. You covered a lot of ground which was surprising as most start out slow and somewhat questioning what they write. I look forward to finding out their backstories in the coming chapters.